1= Mast head is the right size but needs to fill the width of the cover.
2= Font choice is good for masthead. It works well.
3= Colour scheme is good, you just haven't made enough of the pink and blue. As they are used at the moment they lack impact.
4= Text is to thin it needs to be more distinct/blocky and stand out on the cover.
5= Barcode is huge (resize smaller)
6= Where is price/month/issue etc
7= image lacks interest. you need to take more pictures. The ones you have posted on your blog aren't good enough. You have to take about (at least) 50 before you start to see good shots. The girl looks good its the shot that let her and the cover down.
8= Cover star is fuzzy in the middle of the page she needs to be repositioned.
10= one image will do, devote the rest of the space to the article. Im not convinced by this charity aspect. It seems a bit boring and dull. You'd be better off sticking to more normal and cooler music magazine content.
11= Pictures are an issue they are not good enough here either
You've got the skeleton of a decent idea. You'll need to make a proper effort to sort it all out.
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